Very inconsistent

My adwords account looks like this
Headline 1: Ken the Detailer LLC
Headline 2: Mobile detailing I come to YOU
Description: Professional mobile detailing business using only top quality products.
Webpage address: kenthedetailer.com
 
Calendyr said:
When you steal money for a living, you don't know what it's worth and don't mind spending it :) Remember that quote from Mitt Romney when said the average income in america was 250,000$? These people have no idea LOL
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Lmao Certified money stealer lol back up the Brinks truck


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RiverCityAutoSpa said:
My adwords account looks like this
Headline 1: Ken the Detailer LLC
Headline 2: Mobile detailing I come to YOU
Description: Professional mobile detailing business using only top quality products.
Webpage address: kenthedetailer.com
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Do you think you can get your customers to leave more reviews. Site looks good all you need to do is do a little more SEO to give you better natural listings.


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TTQ B4U said:
In all fairness to Romney, Obama said a similar thing when he discussing his plan. He said there would be "Lower tax rates on the first $250,000 of income, affecting 114 million middle class families."

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How is that similar? Lower taxes on the first 250,000. So if you make 40,000$ you get lower taxes. Basically all of the middle class is affected by that...
 
I built it with Wordpress and yoast I’m getting all green lights for SEO. I was mainly wondering if my adwords titles made sense or what I could say to grab more attention. I need to ask for reviews on google I guess
 
ClearVue18 said:
Do you think you can get your customers to leave more reviews. Site looks good all you need to do is do a little more SEO to give you better natural listings.


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How do you get people to leave reviews? I send an email after each detail with the electronic invoice, info about proper maintenance, a video link on how to wash the car and I end by saying that if they are not satisfied with anything, to contact me so I can resolve the issue and if they liked the work I did, I give them a link to place a review on my google page. No one ever posts a review or call me. So I guess they are happy but not enough to click a link? :)
 
Calendyr said:
How do you get people to leave reviews? I send an email after each detail with the electronic invoice, info about proper maintenance, a video link on how to wash the car and I end by saying that if they are not satisfied with anything, to contact me so I can resolve the issue and if they liked the work I did, I give them a link to place a review on my google page. No one ever posts a review or call me. So I guess they are happy but not enough to click a link? :)
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At the end of your appointment just Simply ask for a review. If you have a good rapport with the customer most of the time they will leave you one. Sending a link is ok but sometime face to face is better. When I get links to review places I go 99% of the time I don’t respond but if I know the person and they ask me most likely I’ll leave it.


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RiverCityAutoSpa said:
My adwords account looks like this
Headline 1: Ken the Detailer LLC
Headline 2: Mobile detailing I come to YOU
Description: Professional mobile detailing business using only top quality products.
Webpage address: kenthedetailer.com
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A few tips to improve your add headlines.

1) Stand out - Your first headline does not stand out to me at all. I don't know Ken and I don't know how Ken will solve my problems. People searching on Google have a problem they want solved, make it easy for them to see how you will solve their problems.
2) Be keyword specific - You don't have anything related to the area you serve, if I search Google for "car detailing wichita kansas" I expect to see headlines specific to Witchita Kansas and Car detailing.
3) Use the character limit - Your headlines are short and sweet which is a good thing but you can have more in your description.
4) Use numbers - Numbers stand out, don't be afraid to have a price in your headline.
5) Ask a question - Asking a question in an advertisement leads to more clicks.
6) Have a call to action or command - A command will make people want to click

Headline Examples
- Looking For Car Detailing in Wichita Kansas? Ken the Detailer can help you today
- Car Detailing Wichita Kansas starting at $130
- Wichita Kansas Mobile Detailing: Book Today!
- Need Convenient Mobile Detailing in Wichita Kansas? Ken the Detailer is Your Choice
- Looking to Sell Your Car? Increase the sale price by $1000 with Ken the Detailers Ultimate Detail Package
- Did You Know Engine Detailing Increases the Sale Price of Your Car by $150? Get Yours Done Today!

Description Examples
- Professional mobile detailing for Wichita Kansas and surrounding areas. Ken is the paint correction and ceramic coating specialist.
Get your car detailed today!
- Try out Wichita Kansas area leading Mobile Detailer Packages starting at $130. Monthly Maintenance Plans available!
- Best Mobile Detailer in Wichita Kansas. Serving areas X, Y, Z. Available to book today!
- Ken the Detailer is Wichita Kansas' leading detailer and will come to you to service your car. Paint correction and ceramic coating specialists.

I would come up with more but have to get back to work :(. I hope this helps you get some ideas!

* Note I made up some of the metrics and prices, be sure to be accurate and don't lie in your headlines or descriptions.'

Your website

The button to "Contact now" in your header on your home page goes to this page "http://www.kenthedetailer.com/contact" which results in a 404, this could very easily deter customers. Your Contact Us link on the left sidebar goes to this page "http://www.kenthedetailer.com/nocatee/" which is a strange URL slug but it will resolve to the information. I would recommend you have your phone number VERY prominent on the contact page and even on your home page. It takes too long for a customer to get your phone number to just give you a call.

You may want to look into adding an email address or using an online booking system so that people have options. Some people prefer to interact via email or a booking system if they feel comfortable enough to book that way.

Also just saw that you have a typo on your website
Click here to view serviced offered by Ken the Detailer.
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And I would fix this sentence
Being a full service mobile detailer means many things, providing our own electricity, and filtered Ph balanced water is just one of them.
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On your contact page you are not consistent in using "we" or "I/me" Just change it up where you say "I" and "my" to be consistent and you should be good.

If you would like to contact us directly please call or text (904)599-8900. In the case I cannot get to the phone please leave a voicemail. Texting is always best to ensure accurate information such as the address of the vehicle in question. We try not to answer calls when working on a vehicle so we can have all my attention on that customer’s car. Please leave a voicemail so I know to contact you back, texting is best. We are conveniently located in Nocatee in Ponte Vedra Beach, and serve all surrounding areas. Get in touch and we’ll get back to you as soon as we can. You can also follow all our work at Ken the Detailer on Facebook or Instagram. We look forward to hearing from you and building a relationship.
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Minor typo on your FAQ page. I believe you meant to have "will"
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RiverCityAutoSpa said:
My adwords account looks like this
Headline 1: Ken the Detailer LLC
Headline 2: Mobile detailing I come to YOU
Description: Professional mobile detailing business using only top quality products.
Webpage address: kenthedetailer.com
Click to expand...

A few tips to improve your add headlines.

1) Stand out - Your first headline does not stand out to me at all. I don't know Ken and I don't know how Ken will solve my problems. People searching on Google have a problem they want solved, make it easy for them to see how you will solve their problems.
2) Be keyword specific - You don't have anything related to the area you serve, if I search Google for "car detailing wichita kansas" I expect to see headlines specific to Witchita Kansas and Car detailing.
3) Use the character limit - Your headlines are short and sweet which is a good thing but you can have more in your description.
4) Use numbers - Numbers stand out, don't be afraid to have a price in your headline.
5) Ask a question - Asking a question in an advertisement leads to more clicks.
6) Have a call to action or command - A command will make people want to click

Headline Examples
- Looking For Car Detailing in Wichita Kansas? Ken the Detailer can help you today
- Car Detailing Wichita Kansas starting at $130
- Wichita Kansas Mobile Detailing: Book Today!
- Need Convenient Mobile Detailing in Wichita Kansas? Ken the Detailer is Your Choice
- Looking to Sell Your Car? Increase the sale price by $1000 with Ken the Detailer Ultimate Detail Package

Description Examples
- Professional mobile detailing for Wichita Kansas and surrounding areas. Ken is the paint correction and ceramic coating specialist.
Get your car detailed today!
- Try out Wichita Kansas area leading Mobile Detailer Packages starting at $130. Monthly Maintenance Plans available!
- Best Mobile Detailer in Wichita Kansas. Serving areas X, Y, Z. Available to book today!
- Ken the Detailer is Wichita Kansas' leading detailer and will come to you to service your car. Paint correction and ceramic coating specialists.

I would come up with more but have to get back to work. I hope this helps you get some ideas!

Your website

Your website looks great. A couple of pointers:

Your “Contact Now” Button on your home page in your header goes to a broken page. This probably deters a lot of customers. Your “Contact Us” link in the left navigation works but is to a different URL. Maybe see about using the /contact URL instead of the /nocatee URL since it is clearer what the URL is for for SEO purposes.



On your contact page you should have your phone number very prominent. Also put your phone number on your home page to make it easier for them to call you quickly if they want to. Having your phone number “clickable” in mobile is very useful as well.



Look into offering your email address for communication as well as an online booking system, some people prefer that over phone calls.

A few typos/wording things

I would re-word this sentence:
Being a full service mobile detailer means many things, providing our own electricity, and filtered Ph balanced water is just one of them

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Be consistent in your usage of I/me and us/we, on your contact page you switch between both and it is confusing.
 There are a few usages of I/me instead of we.


We try not to answer calls when working on a vehicle so we can have all my attention on that customer’s car.


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FAQ page minor typo.




Below you fill find a picture demonstrating how a clay bar removes contaminants naked to the eye


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Overall I think you have a great start, let me know if you need any other help!
 
ClearVue18 said:
At the end of your appointment just Simply ask for a review. If you have a good rapport with the customer most of the time they will leave you one. Sending a link is ok but sometime face to face is better. When I get links to review places I go 99% of the time I don’t respond but if I know the person and they ask me most likely I’ll leave it.


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Talked to a client yesterday and he told me the link I provide to the google review doesn't work. I checked it and it works for me... so I logged out of Google and then it no longer worked. So basically, if I want to give them a link to go directly to the review page, I can't. This is ridiculous. I have replaced the link in my emails with the link to my google page instead, but now people have to navigate the page to find the give a review button. Since people are lazy, I don't think this will work so well... but I don't see any other option unless there is a secret way to send them where I want.
 
I don't know how you found his site. I Googled River City Auto Spa and the closest thing I found on the first 3 pages was a blogspot site with 2 pictures. I stopped searching at the end of the third page.

One thing that you should do is put your website address in your signature on the forums to post to. This will create backlinks to your website and will help with your Search Engine Optimization. Also, when someone wants to visit your site, we actually have a link we can use.

It takes time for SEO to get your site in the top of the natural ranking but every little bit helps. Good keyword selection would be a plus too. So make sure you fill the keywords with relevant words for each of your pages.




StartAutoDetailing said:
A few tips to improve your add headlines.

1) Stand out - Your first headline does not stand out to me at all. I don't know Ken and I don't know how Ken will solve my problems. People searching on Google have a problem they want solved, make it easy for them to see how you will solve their problems.
2) Be keyword specific - You don't have anything related to the area you serve, if I search Google for "car detailing wichita kansas" I expect to see headlines specific to Witchita Kansas and Car detailing.
3) Use the character limit - Your headlines are short and sweet which is a good thing but you can have more in your description.
4) Use numbers - Numbers stand out, don't be afraid to have a price in your headline.
5) Ask a question - Asking a question in an advertisement leads to more clicks.
6) Have a call to action or command - A command will make people want to click

Headline Examples
- Looking For Car Detailing in Wichita Kansas? Ken the Detailer can help you today
- Car Detailing Wichita Kansas starting at $130
- Wichita Kansas Mobile Detailing: Book Today!
- Need Convenient Mobile Detailing in Wichita Kansas? Ken the Detailer is Your Choice
- Looking to Sell Your Car? Increase the sale price by $1000 with Ken the Detailer Ultimate Detail Package

Description Examples
- Professional mobile detailing for Wichita Kansas and surrounding areas. Ken is the paint correction and ceramic coating specialist.
Get your car detailed today!
- Try out Wichita Kansas area leading Mobile Detailer Packages starting at $130. Monthly Maintenance Plans available!
- Best Mobile Detailer in Wichita Kansas. Serving areas X, Y, Z. Available to book today!
- Ken the Detailer is Wichita Kansas' leading detailer and will come to you to service your car. Paint correction and ceramic coating specialists.

I would come up with more but have to get back to work. I hope this helps you get some ideas!

Your website

Your website looks great. A couple of pointers:

Your “Contact Now” Button on your home page in your header goes to a broken page. This probably deters a lot of customers. Your “Contact Us” link in the left navigation works but is to a different URL. Maybe see about using the /contact URL instead of the /nocatee URL since it is clearer what the URL is for for SEO purposes.



On your contact page you should have your phone number very prominent. Also put your phone number on your home page to make it easier for them to call you quickly if they want to. Having your phone number “clickable” in mobile is very useful as well.



Look into offering your email address for communication as well as an online booking system, some people prefer that over phone calls.

A few typos/wording things

I would re-word this sentence:


Be consistent in your usage of I/me and us/we, on your contact page you switch between both and it is confusing.
 There are a few usages of I/me instead of we.




FAQ page minor typo.





Overall I think you have a great start, let me know if you need any other help!
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Calendyr said:
I don't know how you found his site. I Googled River City Auto Spa and the closest thing I found on the first 3 pages was a blogspot site with 2 pictures. I stopped searching at the end of the third page.

One thing that you should do is put your website address in your signature on the forums to post to. This will create backlinks to your website and will help with your Search Engine Optimization. Also, when someone wants to visit your site, we actually have a link we can use.

It takes time for SEO to get your site in the top of the natural ranking but every little bit helps. Good keyword selection would be a plus too. So make sure you fill the keywords with relevant words for each of your pages.
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Lol I had a past lol people tracking use to be my specialty lmao. I have a few things that can help your bookings that cost you nothing. Only other thing I can say about your website is your domain I think is a little to long. You always want to have something that is short and catchy. You always want to remember people are somewhat lazy.


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ClearVue18 said:
Lol I had a past lol people tracking use to be my specialty lmao. I have a few things that can help your bookings that cost you nothing. Only other thing I can say about your website is your domain I think is a little to long. You always want to have something that is short and catchy. You always want to remember people are somewhat lazy.


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He wasn't addressing you though. He was addressing StartDetailing.
 
Calendyr said:
Talked to a client yesterday and he told me the link I provide to the google review doesn't work. I checked it and it works for me... so I logged out of Google and then it no longer worked. So basically, if I want to give them a link to go directly to the review page, I can't. This is ridiculous. I have replaced the link in my emails with the link to my google page instead, but now people have to navigate the page to find the give a review button. Since people are lazy, I don't think this will work so well... but I don't see any other option unless there is a secret way to send them where I want.
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sudsmobile said:
He wasn't addressing you though. He was addressing StartDetailing.
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Actually I was addressing StartAutoDetailing, then addressing the OP :) I am lazy too and put everything in the same message LOL
 
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