Friendly evaluation on my flyer

[JohniBoi]

Hello everyone! So as days goes by and I read here and there for some advice. I actually need some advice toward my flyer. I just wanted to know how my flyer looks and if the info seems good. I made the flyer myself so, I might have some errors but extra eyes are always great. Any opinions are great like increase/decrease pricing, add/remove items from services, or anything that might look eye catching. I'm trying to make this flyer reader easy because I'm trying to grow by texting the flyer and posting it on social media. Thanks everyone...if that's a good idea! Btw I do offer polishing...

 

[trekkeruss]

I can barely see it because the thumbnail is too small. Regardless, for a flyer I think it has too much writing on it. Most people can't be "bothered" to read it. IMO you need to make it simpler and more eye catching. Make it funny or something, so people will at the very least remember it.

 

[Billy Baldone]

5-6 hours for $150?????? Little low in my opinion. Like the flyer though. Good solid info

 

[JohniBoi]

I not sure if i did this correct but i resized the image to view better! Thanks every!

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[CYANiDE]

Wall of text and the text in your bubbles aren't centered. Reduce each service to 3-4 bullet points.

 

[JohniBoi]

I can barely see it because the thumbnail is too small. Regardless, for a flyer I think it has too much writing on it. Most people can't be "bothered" to read it. IMO you need to make it simpler and more eye catching. Make it funny or something, so people will at the very least remember it.

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Great I'll work on that! thank for your help

5-6 hours for $150?????? Little low in my opinion. Like the flyer though. Good solid info

I understand that may seem low but, I usually don't take that long but its starts at 150 and increases with different circumstances. Thank you for you help!

Wall of text and the text in your bubbles aren't centered. Reduce each service to 3-4 bullet points.

"wall of text", I see what you guys mean! I'll make those adjustments...thanks and keep it coming.