Marketing

[RevitalizeAutoSpa]

So here's the tri-fold brochure I'm working - any feedback? (Logo is a placeholder until I have one designed, as are the stock images until I get some better photos taken)

Exterior:

Interior:

 

[ArtFoodBMW]

I really like that! Makes me want to create some of my own! And I like the layout of services your using

 

[thebamboo23]

i think if we could actually read the text we could give more feed back :xyxthumbs:

 

[Prestige.Detail]

That brochure looks great! Very proffesional. What program did you use to create it?

 

[Showtime]

Looks great, but don't lead with this. Too much reading for a "cold market" sale. This would be great for someone who is already interested or who comes to you and asks for more information.

 

[Niko Molina]

Looks great man. I like your setup.

 

[RevitalizeAutoSpa]

i think if we could actually read the text we could give more feed back :xyxthumbs:

Picky picky.

That brochure looks great! Very proffesional. What program did you use to create it?

Thanks! Adobe Photoshop CS6. I used to work in television production, and dealt with a lot of graphics.

Looks great, but don't lead with this. Too much reading for a "cold market" sale. This would be great for someone who is already interested or who comes to you and asks for more information.

Agreed. More of something to hand out to people I already know. I'm going to work on a 5x7" for cold stuff.

Looks great man. I like your setup.

Thanks!

 

[Bunky]

Very nice ! Simple, classy.

I do not understand why "Swedish" is just the basics and "Deep Tissue" is the full treatment. Is this some analogy with massages or what? I know nothing about the massage business.

 

[RevitalizeAutoSpa]

Thanks!

You're correct. Figured since both are luxury services, might as well the analogy in on the packages too.

 

[RawDetail]

Way too much of that blue/teal color. I'd make the images of the cars full color, just to make it pop a little.

 

[Audios S6]

Really nice, it does look professionally designed. Under the Swedish, you mention 'the emerald or diamond' (I think) did you change the package names and miss that revision? Toward the end of "the full body".... It should read THAN, not THEN.

Under the full body, at the end, you may want to omit the word 'just' as it may imply your lower level AIO package is nothing special, when in reality it can make the paint look years newer and is probably the best value for most daily drivers - it could be the most profitable too.

 

[RevitalizeAutoSpa]

Really nice, it does look professionally designed. Under the Swedish, you mention 'the emerald or diamond' (I think) did you change the package names and miss that revision? Toward the end of "the full body".... It should read THAN, not THEN.

Under the full body, at the end, you may want to omit the word 'just' as it may imply your lower level AIO package is nothing special, when in reality it can make the paint look years newer and is probably the best value for most daily drivers - it could be the most profitable too.

Awesome, didn't catch all those - thanks. And then versus than is one of my grammatical pet peeves. Ug.

 

[taxi_dub]

:dblthumb2: looks awesome!