Seeking Opinions on Website Round 2

[RhetoricMixes]

Been a while since I had everyone here take a look at my site. I've added new things and redid the layout since the last time I posted about this (around April '13). Let me know if theres room for improvement guys and thanks for looking. Square One Detailing - Home

 

[Pureshine]

Looks good. Way to much to read on your front page and prices page I got tired of reading after the first 5 sec. You need to make it easy to read not a novel and most people don't want to read what their getting for 5 min. There is way to much wording everywhere just my .02.

 

[DevilsNDetails]

I have to agree with PureShine on page 1, First thing that came to mind was "wall of text." I would move your recent work photos up and drop some of the text down to break it up a bit. Just my $.02

However, I really really really liked your gallery set up and how I could look at make then model, which is really nice, especially if your prospective customer has a similar car to one that's posted.

 

[RhetoricMixes]

Ok so I looked over everything and took out any unnecessary lingo for the average joe. Cleaned up the home page and pricing menu and shortened things up and combined things into columns for a better eye view of things. Let me know how it looks now guys.