The overall 'feel' of the site is good. Do want to make sure however that all your photos are of your work, making sure not to use any stock photos.
That being said; The level of spelling and grammatical errors is troubling. Combine that with run on sentences, broken sentences, and short ones to boot and it'll turn people away from the site fairly quickly.
Were it me, the "Signature" would be the top of the line offering. The "Deluxe" package really isn't offering anything else, other than an engine detail, and for $100. (
Yes there are engine details well worth $100 and then some, but added to a $120 two-stage buffing package that could well take 10~12~20 hours it doesn't work.)
The prospective customer, not knowing how much time things take, COULD look at everything you are offering for $120 and wonder why in the name of God's Blue Heaven it costs an extra $100 "just to clean my engine". Leave that package off and sell the engine bay detailing as a secondary (add on / ala cart) package.
The worst of it though are all the spelling and grammar problems.
You mentioned you are using WIX just to get the layout, so this comment may not be pertinent, but on my screen the page doesn't fit. It's too wide, and too tall no matter what I do. Should be auto scaling to fit.
Another thing on the packages. I'd put several packages out there, and put them ALL on one page. Break them up with more services added as the package price goes up, perhaps even putting the most expensive package at the top (which forces someone to look at the whole page to find the cheapest offerings). Put them on a page in some sort of logical manner. Also, the description(s) of processes going on within a package read better as a bulleted list. (
As opposed to broken up, shortened up, and/or run on sentences.)
Honestly... the pricing of your "Signature Package" seems unbelievably low. You're saying you will do a multi-step, 2-stage (compound AND polish) detail WITH wax (sealant), AND polishing and waxing/sealing the wheels for $120? WOW! I would do everything in that package EXCEPT crank up a buffer (to the paint or wheels) for just under that price. Start prepping a vehicle for compounding and you'll spend hours getting it ready, decon, taping, covering wheels/tires, opening glass sunroof's and covering/taping the hole
Especially as you are offering wheel polishing on another page as a stand alone offering, (that has to be quoted on demand). If I'm polishing wheels that means I'm removing them, and I'll not even
consider doing that for less than $25.00 per wheel.
I'll remove and decontaminate the wheels then put a sealant or coating on them for $15 per wheel.
Not saying you need to sell only higher priced packages that focus on paint correction, but you DO need to look at your offerings, AND ESPECIALLY THE TIME INVOLVED and come up with what you can do, in a given amount of time, with your level of experience.
Oh, and taking appointments at 10:00pm, uhhhhhh...... unless you're in Alaska it'll be well past dark. Washing alone, (as described in your packages) can take a couple of hours (if not more). I'd move that time frame back to 7:00. (Perhaps 7:00~7:00 and call it a day.) The last thing you need is the neighbors calling the cops with you out there running a buffer, generator, pressure washer, big banks of lights, vacuum cleaners and/or carpet extractors at midnight.
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