Hi Ron, on your main page you have a text box showing: (see pic)
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The only other thing is, you're web-site is high-line car heavy, unless you actually detailed those cars. (i.e. Cobra, Audi etc..) I would just post what you've done.
Also, I see the use of photo's from established websites such as auto manufacturers. You may get a cease and desist nasty-gram from them.
They spend big bucks on marketing photo's to have them used for someone else marketing... ;-)
Show your work off, that's what a discerning customer is going to look for. Trust me on this one!
The customers who don't care about their cars won't care about the photo's, but do you want those customers anyway?
This may involve doing some friends and family cars and really get detailed before and after shots... (i.e. view most of the "Show-N-Shine" posts).
Second, you state "I operate my detailing business on a part time basis, using top of the line products such as Griots Garage, "
The hours of operation have nothing to do with the using top of the line products"... Instead you might say:
Our hours of operation are (just an example) Saturday 7am-7pm; Sunday 7am-5pm. (period, next line...)
We use nothing but the best products on your vehicle, such as.........
The only other small thing I have is you've published your address. Be careful with the laws in your town.
A selectman or towncouncil member may find you are operating a business out of a residence that isn't zoned for it.
You may be better off stating: (example only): Serving the greater Anytown USA area.
Along with what everyone else has already said, you're off to a good start. I wish you all the success.
And again, from one veteran to another, thank you for serving our country!
