Yes... Another "Critique My Business Card Thread"

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Hey guys and gals,

I am trying to create a logo and business card. I am using Adobe Illustrator CS6 - which by the way I am NO expert at.

What I am going for is clean, simple and to the point.

Any feedback is greatly appreciated. The car outline will be a vector graphic and much smoother if I decide to go with this concept.

Thank you!


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I had these concepts drawn up by a logo creation outfit... Just not sure I am crazy about them. The blue background is just a snippet of the header from my website he used.

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Even if there was a patent it would cost an extremely large amount of money to sue you. If there was a patent it would have to be registered where you specifically are. I wouldn't worry about that. Even the slightest changes make it unique and not subject to a patent law.
 
Nice straight forward design, good job!

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Theo_Auto_Fines said:
How many detailers are using the cars silhouette as their logo.
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Most, but not in the same market hopefully!

Also if you question it, you question many on this forum.

Still, I agree it's bcoming dangerously ubiquitous.
 
ObsessiveAutoDetail said:
Hey guys and gals,

I am trying to create a logo and business card. I am using Adobe Illustrator CS6 - which by the way I am NO expert at.

What I am going for is clean, simple and to the point.

Any feedback is greatly appreciated. The car outline will be a vector graphic and much smoother if I decide to go with this concept.

Thank you!


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I like it. It follows your goal of a clean un cluttered design. I would offer some feedback to look at the text boxes on logo. There seems to be a "cut" in the black silhouette line that may be the text box overlapping. Lastly check the text below "obsessive" to be sure it aligned the same as your web site or vise-versa. The card looks to be left justified where the web site has it more toward the center.

Overall, I do like your approach. I personally like clean designs. Often less is more and conveys that "attention to detail" you want you market to recognize.
 
charleyh2 said:
I like it. It follows your goal of a clean un cluttered design. I would offer some feedback to look at the text boxes on logo. There seems to be a "cut" in the black silhouette line that may be the text box overlapping. Lastly check the text below "obsessive" to be sure it aligned the same as your web site or vise-versa. The card looks to be left justified where the web site has it more toward the center.

Overall, I do like your approach. I personally like clean designs. Often less is more and conveys that "attention to detail" you want you market to recognize.
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The silhouette is not a vector image (yet)... If I decide to go with this design it will be and the "notch" will be no longer. As far as alignment of the name of my business... I was just trying something different. It will be consistent across my entire business image as soon as I settle on something. I really appreciate the feedback!
 
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