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It looks good. I am using Weebly too through Hostgator. How do you like it? My only complaint is that I am pulling my hair out trying to get a higher ranking on Google search.

Edge Detail - Edge Detail - Bonney Lake

This might be overly critical, but here are my thoughts (and I am not a website expert by any means!):

I like the colors you put together.

On the "Home" Page, I had to read a little bit to find out that you are in the Scranton area. Maybe you could incorporate that into your "Omega Auto Spa" picture??? And, would it be better to have the pictures at the bottom of your work automatically be a slide show instead of just a static picture?

The "service" tab, the packages look a little disorganized. It would seem more professional to if they were all symmetrical. And, the line that says "contact me to put together a custom package for you", it would be nice if you could link that to your "contact" page.

The rest looks pretty good. I know I have changed my website at least 50 times in the last 2 months. It's very time consumig when you have a "day job".

On a side note, I gave your Facebook page a "like"!
 
I'd remove the brand of products you use from the homepage because clients won't really care.

I'd also rethink your Deluxe package pricing. A similar service to what I offer starts at $300. After you perform a couple you'll realize you're cheating yourself.

I would also merge the decontamination bullets into one "- Paint Decontamination".
 
Thank you elund and Scott. I will work on those areas.
 
there's a lot you can change.. here's a few:

-remove logo from pic (visitors don't care about that)

- change all copy from 'Driven to exceed your expectations!' and 'The only choice for high-end detailing services in the area!'... write something beneficial for the customer

- remove logo from services page

- write some text for each service... not just points

- all those fancy words like polymer, sap/tar/bird, chemically/mechanically decontaminate, etc... visitors don't care.. and you're probably confusing the heck out of them
 
This is just my $0.02, but I really like the colors of your logo as it appears on your facebook page...has more pop in my opinion. Otherwise, I like the simplicity of your site.
 
Scott@IncrediblyDetailed said:
I'd remove the brand of products you use from the homepage because clients won't really care.

I'd also rethink your Deluxe package pricing. A similar service to what I offer starts at $300. After you perform a couple you'll realize you're cheating yourself.

:iagree:

I would also merge the decontamination bullets into one "- Paint Decontamination".
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i would looking into your add-on pricing as well, i think you are shorting yourself on these prices.
 
One of the better if not the best first attempt I have seen. I like your logo and slogans. I would like to see a little more about you and a picture of you.

Shop your area and see what your competition is charging. I agree with the previous poster that you are very low on your top end package.
 
refreshauto said:
i would looking into your add-on pricing as well, i think you are shorting yourself on these prices.
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Thank you. I don't feel right now I can charge anymore than what I already am being that I am not established. I am already priced above much of my competition in the area. Being that I am trying to do higher-end work I will eventually raise my prices.
 
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