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so its not finished yet, a friend of mine makes websites for companies and is making me one for free:P

like i said theres still changes to be made, but take a look at it and let me know what you think about the site and my services.

its brilliancemobiledetailing.com
 
Looks really nice.
The text on the service page is a little dark, would be easier to read if it was white.
I like the simple and clean layout. the simpler the better.
I like your logo also.
 
It looks nice. I would change the color though like mentioned above. Also, is the gallery not working yet?
 
I would also change the title in the index.html it should read:

<title> Defense Marketing Group</title>

change it to:

<title>Brilliance Mobile Detailing</title>

This is the text that shows in your tabs or if you don't have tops at the very top of your browser!

I take it this guy's name is Michal Kaczmarek?
 
M.P. Cobra Fan said:
It looks nice. I would change the color though like mentioned above. Also, is the gallery not working yet?
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thanks 4 the advice, and nope the gallery isnt working yet but will be soon, im lacking pictures haha.
 
maximus20895 said:
I would also change the title in the index.html it should read:

<title> Defense Marketing Group</title>

change it to:

<title>Brilliance Mobile Detailing</title>

This is the text that shows in your tabs or if you don't have tops at the very top of your browser!

I take it this guy's name is Michal Kaczmarek?
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YES THIS!! I just did a google search for you and your website came up first, however it was titled Defense Marketing Group. Honestly, I would bypass that right away if I was searching for you. Customers will not find you!

ride5150 said:
thanks 4 the advice, and nope the gallery isnt working yet but will be soon, im lacking pictures haha.
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No problem. No get to detailing some friends and family cars so you can get some pics up!!!!!!!!!! LOL!:dblthumb2:
 
Google, like most, look in the title for their results and that is what you are seeing. When you change it Google will check your site out and it will change in a week or so.
 
haha:P yeah my friend used a template for a site he did before thats why the home defense thing is coming up, well change it soon.

i have a few pics already but theyre all befores, i still need 2 go back and make sum afters:P

do u guys have any advice about content?
 
As far as content, customers like to see exactly what they are purchasing, your services page does a good job of explaining what you do. Perhaps adding in explanations and answers to common questions or misconceptions like clay-baring, swirl removal, facts and dangers about automatic car washes. Also mentioning a little about the products used in you cleaning process is helpful.:props:
 
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