My newest business card & rack card

tuscarora dave

tuscarora dave

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What do you guys think?

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I really like it. Not too distracting but shows enough pictures and wording for others to understand the point of the cards.
 
rider9195 said:
I really like it. Not too distracting but shows enough pictures and wording for others to understand the point of the cards.
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Thanks, I agree. The nice thing is that the images are all from photos I took of cars that I actually detailed.

LuxuryMobile said:
Looks nice
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rsav said:
I like it !!
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Thanks guys.
Nicholas@Autowerx said:
Looks great! What software did you use to design the card rack inserts?
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Thanks, I paid a print shop/marketing designer to design it all for me. I don't have a clue when it comes to that type of software.
 
Really nice Dave. I think they are perfect! To the point but leaves someone wondering about what can you can to their car............ which leads to that all important phone call. Good luck!!
 
Nice, Dave! Good thing you didn't put the picture of you passed out with Fido on it :p
 
I don't like it, here are some tips:

1. Replace the white Bentley with something black, how about that Aston Martin?
White doesn't really show all the hard hours you've put onto the veichle.
Black cars shine better and demand respect when the finish is flawless.

2. The sun shot on the hood: It doesn't show the after very well for a non-detail person, can you get a better shot?

3. The 2 (top left) red hood shots are not showing the gloss to it's full potential, replace those photos with something black... If you really want the red hood, get another shot from a better angle.

Me? A degree in Advertising and just trying to help.

Post the new mock-up when you finish it.
 
It's looks good Dave. It's a very classy design and appealing to the eye....:props:
 
bmwgalore said:
I don't like it, here are some tips:

1. Replace the white Bentley with something black, how about that Aston Martin?
White doesn't really show all the hard hours you've put onto the veichle.
Black cars shine better and demand respect when the finish is flawless.

2. The sun shot on the hood: It doesn't show the after very well for a non-detail person, can you get a better shot?

3. The 2 (top left) red hood shots are not showing the gloss to it's full potential, replace those photos with something black... If you really want the red hood, get another shot from a better angle.

Me? A degree in Advertising and just trying to help.

Post the new mock-up when you finish it.
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I agree with #2. That was what I immediately thought of when I saw it. As far as everything else goes, looks good! :xyxthumbs:
 
Asking now is probably to late because it looks like you already had it printed. But the word Dave's is completely lost you don't even notice it in the business name. I know its important because it's your name. It looks professionally done but at the same time it looks a little busy maybe to much going on. My wife is a graphic designer she dose all my stuff. She always says a nice clean layout works best. She says you don't want to much going on. She said the most important thing is to get your point across with saying to much. Your phone number jump out so people know how to get ahold of you. Never go to pitcher heavy.
 
disregard some of what I said. It looks much better on my home computer than it did on my iPhone. On my phone everything red looked really washed out but on my computer screen the red really stands out.
I guess you will have to mail one out to every forum member so we can check them out. lol.
 
BillE said:
One word...QUALITY!

Looks great...

Bill
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Thanks Bill. This is what I was after. When I spoke to the designer I told him that I really wasn't too concerned with what it said on it but more so that when a prespective client got it in his/her hand, the first impression was that it is a quality piece. Being an image on a computer screen you don't necessarily see the enamel and UV coating that you see when it's in your hand.

The last guy who rented the shop that I am in printed his business cards on ordinary everyday copy paper, "Oh, That ain't workin". I'm sure that spoke volumes as to what he found to be important.

Thanks for you're opinions both good and bad.
 
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