1st set of business cards

sapple89

sapple89

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i am almost 100% sure i am going to order these cards. it took for ever to make. 5hrs+

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Looks great.....good job.
I would probably leave off "Armor All" so you can be flexible with your products. Unless Armor All is a sponsor for your business.
Just my .02
 
Red350 said:
Looks great.....good job.
I would probably leave off "Armor All" so you can be flexible with your products. Unless Armor All is a sponsor for your business.
Just my .02
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well armor all was going to do something with me but then i decided agaisnt it. so i will be changing all the words on the card.

problems:
title: people with a civic or honda may be discouraged to call me because of the word. When a lot of people hear the word exotic they think porn.(dont want to give that kind of impression)

8 step: could be more or less (being be changed to full detail)

armor all: being taken off

paint correction: i have not played around with touch up paint or color sanding.

backround boxes: im not sure about these i think they are going to go also.

what should i add? i need imput people!
 
Id just remove the Armor All and change it to full detail, not 8 step.
 
Drop the AA id change the background to make stuff pop more
 
So people won't think that you can do paint touch up or wet sanding, just put "Swirl removal" instead of "paint correction", or maybe put "paint polishing".
 
I would like to suggest maybe something like this

1. Exterior and Interior Wash's (Most people look at this)

2. Polish and Wax (People who are looking for more will look at this)

3. Full Details (People who want the full package or detail will look at this)

4. Paint Correction (People who want something small fixed will look at this)

I work at a car wash and these are words they use the most because everyone knows what they are.

Again you want to use words everyone understands.
 
kastanaras said:
I would like to suggest maybe something like this

1. Exterior and Interior Wash's (Most people look at this)

2. Polish and Wax (People who are looking for more will look at this)

3. Full Details (People who want the full package or detail will look at this)

4. Paint Correction (People who want something small fixed will look at this)

I work at a car wash and these are words they use the most because everyone knows what they are.

Again you want to use words everyone understands.
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:iagree:
 
post your fees and any ideas you have as to where you plan to advertise.
 
sapple89 said:
i am almost 100% sure i am going to order these cards. it took for ever to make. 5hrs+

exoticDetailers_lol3_2.jpg



Tell me what you think
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Drop Armor All, and add Turlte Wax.:D
I seriously would not use brand names in a business card, as you will probably be using over 20 brand later on.
 
cosmo e46 said:
post your fees and any ideas you have as to where you plan to advertise.
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i dont want to post my prices bc they may change depending on the car. 2 door 4 door suv. this way i am not committed to charge a certain amount. i will up date you guys on the change
 
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