35 Word Mobile Detailing Ad?

[Nabors]

Hey everyone!
How would you write a 35 word max ad for mobile detailing? The community newsletter I will be advertising in has a 35 word max.
Thanks!

 

[FinishingTouchA]

Subscribed for answers. May contribute once my PR person gets back to me.

 

[VP Mark]

[Your name detailing]
Mobile, on site service
Fully Insured
Interior Steam Cleaning
Packages to fit all budgets
"Bringing back that new car feeling, one car at a time"
(618) 983-9706 visualprodetailing.com


Clear, concise, easy to contact, make an emotional connection.

 

[Nabors]

[Your name detailing]
Mobile, on site service
Fully Insured
Interior Steam Cleaning
Packages to fit all budgets
"Bringing back that new car feeling, one car at a time"
(618) 983-9706 visualprodetailing.com


Clear, concise, easy to contact, make an emotional connection.

Thanks! Once I get some clients, I will be able to spread more by word of mouth. I have a lot of confidence in my detailing ability, but communicating that can be difficult. Since I'm trying to get my foot in the door, I'm priced low (comes to about $20 an hour).