Advertising Idea... Please critique

[mjv231]

So so far I've been following the much given advice of taking a bite of an apple one bit at a time... in other words... I've been sticking with reg wash and spray wax... mostly for friends and family.... while I've been doing this in the street... i get people that come and talk to me and are very intrigued for what i seem to be doing... and got me thinking (scary thought) and came up with this idea...

Critique please... should i add, take away... color change? thank you all in advance... by the way had no idea where to put this thread... lol

by the way the idea is to have 2 one of front of the car and one in the rear...

 

[rickylexus250]

I think the colours and the logo are OK, just the wording needs to be a bit stronger (the message), perhaps a condensed font bearing in mind that we are reading sideways.

 

[Kengo123]

^agree

maybe simplify the wording. the flags i drive by with 1 word are hard enough to read and catch my attention

 

[mjv231]

By simplify you guys mean like the wording on the left side?


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[rickylexus250]

Yes, should be something simple like this (large and bold, white letters are OK)
CAR DETAILING
718-200-4002

 

[dc52nv]

Make sure to check with your local code enforcement dept if these signs are even allowed. Here where I live they are not allowed and they will fine you.

 

[Vancity808]

pretty sure its spelt consultations

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[mjv231]

Yes, should be something simple like this (large and bold, white letters are OK)
CAR DETAILING
718-200-4002

Great!

Make sure to check with your local code enforcement dept if these signs are even allowed. Here where I live they are not allowed and they will fine you.

NYC - strict on some things... these things not so much...

pretty sure its spelt consultations

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lol good catch!