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Ok Im not going to proclaim to be a web guru because I am far from it. I am just doing this with a template given to me and I have never created a website before. Take a look at it so far and all comments are welcome

the logo is just temporary and I plan on adding more pictures and pictures of higher quality since alot of the ones you see are from my Iphone.

Thank you in advance!

Jon
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I'm not a webguy or anything, but just based on your home screen my initial thoughts are move the entire section with text to the middle of the page. I think that would look better. It looks nice though.
 
Brian_Brice said:
I'm not a webguy or anything, but just based on your home screen my initial thoughts are move the entire section with text to the middle of the page. I think that would look better. It looks nice though.
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Great Idea! Already done thank you. That does look alot better. After looking at this stupid thing for so many hrs you begin to get crosseyed lol
 
I like the simplicity of the site, it's straight to the point. The only thing I would improve on is not web design but your prices. You are undercharging by a lot for the work that goes into detailing.
 
PAR Detailing said:
Ok Im not going to proclaim to be a web guru because I am far from it. I am just doing this with a template given to me and I have never created a website before. Take a look at it so far and all comments are welcome

Thank you in advance!

Jon
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Hi Jon,

This is a pretty good first effort. My suggestion at this point would be to reformat your picture (Before & After) page. Way too much open space with the images in a single column. Place them into at least 2 columns and if your template allows it you can use smaller pictures with click for larger image. With a little effort and some time the learning curve comes pretty quick. Keep working at it and don't let that occassional "Bug" frustrate you.:xyxthumbs:
 
I think the prices are decent, but some packages could be tweeked a little bit.. I price my washes at 25/35 and wash and wax for 75/85.
 
Simple & clear info. Thats all the customer needs to choose. they also can see the difference to influence the choice. I like how you did the floors in all cars.:dblthumb2:
 
Simple and also good start. You need to align the paragraphs properly.
 
Also center your logo on the top and make the buttons a little more obvious.
 
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