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Hello everyone ,

Here is my detailing / hobby page. I have read several detailers web site on line and summarized all of them into mine.

Please provide any feedback.

http://leethedetailer.webs.com/
 
Plan b Detail said:
You worded it really nicely! Almost as if I would have done it ;) hahahaha
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Thank you for the compliment. I am not really a computer geek , so I was just trying to re-word others' sentences while uploading images etc.

What about the pricing for the two packages? Are they acceptable?

And the quality of the pictures , are they okay ?


Thank you so much.
 
Ok, I will give my honest feedback (I used to design websites back in the day)
1. You have many different fonts, sizes of fonts, and colors - which lacks professionalism
2. Your banner is just of water - I have no idea your a detail business
3. You home picture - I would change to a close up or a different location
4. The photo page is nice, I just could not open them
5. Do not like all the pictures of products on the FAQ page. You copied them and put them in there. All different sizes and backgrounds. Again does not look professional. One shot of the product you own and use would be fine here
6. On the rates page - I have to scroll down to get to the prices. Plus you have two different oversized pictures that really do not have anything to do with prices. The font size is really bad on this page.
7. Also, you can take off the "make a web page" by going into the code and deleting it.
Again my .02
 
CaneMustang said:
Ok, I will give my honest feedback (I used to design websites back in the day)
1. You have many different fonts, sizes of fonts, and colors - which lacks professionalism
2. Your banner is just of water - I have no idea your a detail business
3. You home picture - I would change to a close up or a different location
4. The photo page is nice, I just could not open them
5. Do not like all the pictures of products on the FAQ page. You copied them and put them in there. All different sizes and backgrounds. Again does not look professional. One shot of the product you own and use would be fine here
6. On the rates page - I have to scroll down to get to the prices. Plus you have two different oversized pictures that really do not have anything to do with prices. The font size is really bad on this page.
7. Also, you can take off the "make a web page" by going into the code and deleting it.
Again my .02
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Thank you for the feedback and I will definitely work on that .
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i agree with what canemustang had to say

couple other small things i noticed - typos. bottom of your FAQ page I see "scretch" instead of 'scratch'. I skimmed over a couple others i think also.

poorboys black hole is technically not a sealant. its just a glaze

some of your before / after photos are good. however, i'd remove any of the ones that you've added effects to. doesn't really serve a purpose in my opinion. I'm much more impressed (from customers point of view) with the before / after photos of the scratches you removed
 
Hello everyone,

Thank you again for all the feedback. I will re-word all those typos. All of your assistance are much appreciated =)

And I would like to apologize to Bryan as well for coping and pasting some of the sentences on his page. It wont happen again.
 
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