Dream Detail - New Logo- feedback?

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Hi all, here is the new Dream Detail logo
Let me know what you think! :xyxthumbs:

Two variants:

With tag line:
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Without tag line:
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Feed back please:dblthumb2:
 
I really like the first one with tag line. The second one keeps pulling my eyes to the thick blue line. The second one would be good if the line was thinner. Looks good though!
 
Seeing as I read the the first word in the tag line as something else , I'm going to say I like it better without the tag line.
 
awesome! Chris, what did you read the first word as??

I'll be using both for different situations but will try to thin out the blue line.
 
Iron400 said:
I really like the first one with tag line. The second one keeps pulling my eyes to the thick blue line. The second one would be good if the line was thinner. Looks good though!
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I agree
 
TrKent said:
awesome! Chris, what did you read the first word as??

I'll be using both for different situations but will try to thin out the blue line.
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If you must know, Urinal. I couldn't tell you why, that's just the word that I saw it as at first for some reason. lol
 
I like it a lot, but I would justify/kern the letters the word 'Detail' so it was lined up with the left AND right end of 'Dream'. I would also do the same with the tag line. IME the block of text is more appealing to the eye.
 
Chris's FX4 said:
If you must know, Urinal. I couldn't tell you why, that's just the word that I saw it as at first for some reason. lol
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:laughing: Maybe I should make sure everyone has gone to the bathroom before checking out my logo!

02xtreme07SS said:
I like it a lot, but I would justify/kern the letters the word 'Detail' so it was lined up with the left AND right end of 'Dream'. I would also do the same with the tag line. IME the block of text is more appealing to the eye.
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Good idea, i'll mess around with that

rustytruck said:
Looks good.
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Thank you!!
 
i like the first one as well and only have 2 recommendations:

  • reduce the size of the big D to be no taller than the total height of the wording Dream Detail.
  • make word 'Detail' the same width as 'Dream'

i think these two changes will bring more focus to the name of your company and slogan instead of focusing on the big D.

my 2 cents :)
 
waderw24 said:
i like the first one as well and only have 2 recommendations:

  • reduce the size of the big D to be no taller than the total height of the wording Dream Detail.
  • make word 'Detail' the same width as 'Dream'

i think these two changes will bring more focus to the name of your company and slogan instead of focusing on the big D.

my 2 cents :)
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alrighty, i'll mock that up and see how it looks
 
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