Finished my website what do you all think?

Hondaforlife954

Hondaforlife954

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Hey guys,

Been working my website with my little brother for a few weeks now. Finally got it to a point to let it go live!....

What do you all think?

www.coloradodetail.com
 
Looks good. You do have a grammer issue in a couple of places when you state "Engine bay is rinsed and blown dried." Consider changing that to "Engine bay is reinsed and blown dry."
 
I forgot to add. I graduted from Colorado State University in 1970, Accounting degree.
 
I'll be honest..its just another typical website...nothing different or unique..it has all the basic info and is easy to navigate. But no special features that make ti pop. Thats just my opinion of a consumer who might stumble upon it

I would have a more call to action feature to it..."schedule your detail online and get 10% off...or something similiar, you goal is to have them take action!
 
I'd recommend some more photos on your before / after page. maybe a slideshow or something to showcase more work (you can check out my page to see what I mean)

also, I feel the before / afters should be more stunning. Not even just removing swirls and that type of thing. Show a car with bird bombs all over it then cleaned after. or an interior in desperate need of a vacuum that you took care of. you can keep it simple. just create some 'wow' factor if you can

Also, half of your before / after shots are under the hood. Many people never get the engine detailed (many people don't even know you can clean in there). However, everyone knows what a dirty vs clean interior looks like. I'd include interior shots in place of some of the engine work
 
Looks good to me. Like others said a few spelling errors, so fix those and you will be on your way!
 
thanks guys for the feed back....will most definitely put more pics up as i do more cars!
 
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