First attempt at a Biz card

A.P.A.D. said:
i would still bring down more the House of Waxx part or give it a bigger font size.
"bring back...." part have in the center of the card.

example:

House of Waxx
Auto Detailing​

also keep in mind that the typical business card is 2"x3.5", this card is a little too much height when brought back to scale(it is at about 7"x11.5" here. scaling would be the same if it were 6"x10.5"). so the final product will be a little more shorter thus compacting everything so to speak. hope that makes sense.
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Ok, I changed the image size to 4x7.
Increased the house of waxx font size
decreased the font size of my name
Added a email address.
I plan on getting a web site and domain name that will give me a more professional email address. This is just for the time being.
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With auto detailing font a bit smaller
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Here is one with a slogan. Ill have to think up a USP
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My .02... the HOUSE OF WAXX, and AUTO DETAILING, need a little more meat - thicker font, but not like the very first attempt.

Not thrilled with "Dont (Don't) Get Caught Riding Dirty". I don't know if that's a great phrase for your potential clientele. Also, use correct punctuation. If you do use this, the first version is misspelled.

Owner/Operator for your title make me think of a truck driver and is distracting. How about just owner if you must have a title?
 
Definitely coming along! Keep working on the slogan, im sure you can come up with something more classy and catchy. If you want, it would be great to change "Owner/Operator" to "Experienced Professional" That way it builds trust with experienced and professional. It could also affect peoples perception by thinking your a representative of a larger company and the owner is not doing the work themselves.
 
RLove said:
Not thrilled with "Dont (Don't) Get Caught Riding Dirty". I don't know if that's a great phrase for your potential clientele. Also, use correct punctuation. If you do use this, the first version is misspelled.

Owner/Operator for your title make me think of a truck driver and is distracting. How about just owner if you must have a title?
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:iagree:

Wes Calloway said:
Definitely coming along! Keep working on the slogan, im sure you can come up with something more classy and catchy. If you want, it would be great to change "Owner/Operator" to "Experienced Professional" That way it builds trust with experienced and professional. It could also affect peoples perception by thinking your a representative of a larger company and the owner is not doing the work themselves.
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I like the "experienced professional" line! that is very strong!

Yeah the "Don't get caught riding dirty" slogan is kinda raunchy... Coming up with a slogan is difficult but it can be done...
My slogan follows the name of the company: CrownKote "Give your car the royal treatment"

Try something that follows the name...
 
So I was thinking about a slogan.
House Of Wax Auto Detailing
Come To Where Perfection Lives
Where Shine Lives
Where Clean Calls Home​

Still brain storming.
 
Bodezafa said:
So I was thinking about a slogan.
House Of Wax Auto Detailing
Come To Where Perfection Lives
Where Shine Lives
Where Clean Calls Home​

Still brain storming.
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Bring back that new car look
 
I think you were closer when focusing on "restoring the new car look" theme.
 
Bodezafa said:
I like it.:xyxthumbs:

Why is your phone number like that?
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The phone number BR-549 is famous from Junior Samples on the Hee Haw TV show.


The second part of the number...OU812...well you can figure that one out by yourself.
 
BR-549...Now that was some funny (insert your favorite word) there.

Bill
 
Here's another to make you smile.

[ame=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5S2z8rDL9Hg]YouTube - ‪BR-549‬‏[/video]
 
Thanx Merlin!

I never cared much for CW, but we watched that program faithfully each week...kinda like Laugh-In goes country. Just plain funny.

Bill
 
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