Hello...Just finished my detailing website...take a look...

curious about the Nanoskin decontamination treatment.
is that a pad and liquid VS> clay?
how do you like it?
(mite wanna re-phrase last sentence in the description of first level service, coat wax doesn't fit, maybe just missed a word)

good luck with your website/business
 
looks good.. some constructive crit tho.... home and service links are sorta hard to see... maybe move it somewhere else or make it more clear..... and the list of services u offer.... nice... but confusing and a bit hard to read.. i think u should simplify it.. instead of writing a paragraph.. try using Bullet points and listing each individual items per service....otherwise.. nice site 8)
 
thanks for the look and comments...I really and I mean really enjoy the NanoSkin Auto Scrubber...lets see...it works faster and better then a claybar. I cut my lets say "Claying" more then half the time, Im not tired. If I drop the Nanoskin I just wash it off unlike a claybar which I would have to throw away...$$$ wasted in my book. I will never use a claybar again...Nanoskin for me.
 
An important note your telephone number is hard to see as well. I would take some of your pictures and create a gallery with caption of what service was utilized as well as products.

Ed
 
350z00m said:
looks good.. some constructive crit tho.... home and service links are sorta hard to see... maybe move it somewhere else or make it more clear..... and the list of services u offer.... nice... but confusing and a bit hard to read.. i think u should simplify it.. instead of writing a paragraph.. try using Bullet points and listing each individual items per service....otherwise.. nice site 8)
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Slapping my head..I even thought about doing that...Well I will take care of that also. Thanks.
 
Eandras said:
An important note your telephone number is hard to see as well. I would take some of your pictures and create a gallery with caption of what service was utilized as well as products.

Ed
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I had a dedicated Gallery page but the free site where I made it at would not let me load it since I went over my page limit., so I have to upgrade to get more pages...its on the list to do...

Thanks
 
Space out packages to have difference. I would also add more money for suvs and pickups bc its usually more time. Finally I would do things like simple one item like just wheel clean, just interior clean and dress, just wax. Then look at the customers vehicle and see if it needs more Overall pretty good graphics and photos. Maybe also add a vehicle tip section to keep your car showroom new mechanically and looks. Like skip auto car washes, change oil brakes at this amount of miles etc. I would also do a lottery type thing where the winner will get a half off full detail. Make the tickets cost 1 dollar to cover cost and gain profit =):dblthumb2:
 
Ok...I just got fixing my site and making it more easy to read..Thanks
 
Package 2, bullet 3: fix the spacing after "maintain"
Package 3, bullet 3: fix the syntax
 
on your last package... be alittle more clear on your last step.... u dont want to put a sealant over a wax.. wont bond correctly... u want put the sealant on before the wax

on the 2nd package.. put a space between the "Maintain Superior reflextion"

And on the first package.. offer a seperate service for engine bay cleaning.. make more $$... but keep the price the way it is.

i'll post again once those are corrected 8).. if there are any...

also try to be alittle more simple.. for example..on your 3rd package.. u say u will do a second coat of polish...

Try " 2 step Compound/Polish by machine"

also i know its easier to say this includes package 1 and 2....i like to relist everything in that package your offering even though its redundant.... so they dont have to go BACK to see whats in the other packages... this also goes for your 2nd package 8)...

i know its alot but it will help you in the end 8)......try going to other detailers websites to get ideas... but dont copy 8) lol definaly helps 8).

Jay
 
tried calling your # on you page to chat but no answer lol 8)...

if u want PM me and i can help u further 8)
 
was really nice talking with you John.. 8) hope i was some kind of help toward your up and coming business 8)... best of luck and u have my # now .. feel free to give me a call if u have any more questions or concerns 8)

Jay
 
I would just suggest you fix up all the grammatical errors on your pages. Things like a space between asterix and word on one line, then no space between asterix and word on the next line.

With the gallery, what you can do maybe is link some pictures from an outside source like imageshack (ImageShack® - Online Photo and Video Hosting). It's free to sign up and host images. I've bene using it for years.
 
350z00m said:
was really nice talking with you John.. 8) hope i was some kind of help toward your up and coming business 8)... best of luck and u have my # now .. feel free to give me a call if u have any more questions or concerns 8)

Jay
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Yes it was nice talking to you also...You and the other members here have gave me some good idea's and caught mistakes that I will take care of. Just taking a break from the Audi A6 Avant full detail right now. Its looking like a totally different Audi and in a great way.
 
Disciple said:
I would just suggest you fix up all the grammatical errors on your pages. Things like a space between asterix and word on one line, then no space between asterix and word on the next line.

With the gallery, what you can do maybe is link some pictures from an outside source like imageshack (ImageShack® - Online Photo and Video Hosting). It's free to sign up and host images. I've bene using it for years.
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Thanks alot...maybe you can hit me up..my number is on the website and you can explain it more to me. Thanks again.

John
 
I'm in Australia, so the call might cost me a few dollars, lol.

I can send you a PM later today with more detailed instructions and all the fixed grammar stuff if you like.
 
ReflectiveAuto said:
I had a dedicated Gallery page but the free site where I made it at would not let me load it since I went over my page limit., so I have to upgrade to get more pages...its on the list to do...

Thanks
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If not in violation could you name FREE WEBSITE and give some insite on their services
 
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