Help me choose my business card! Options inside

:applause: Looks nice. Is this card going to be used for new business, or for appointments only?
 
Nuke33 said:
Are you a mobil detailer? or do you go and pick there car up? I like the date and time part... The web address is a good idea, Do you have any terms on canceling an appointment like a fee or something... Becasue you could say something about that.
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Mobile Detailing.

Here's what I got right now:

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I don't know what else to say as far as recommended package. I want to be able to let the customer know what they should do on their next appointment when receiving the card.
 
Lone_Star said:
:applause: Looks nice. Is this card going to be used for new business, or for appointments only?
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Both. I can hand out the car if someone may be interested or wants to find out more.

And then after every detail I can fill one out real quick and hand it to the owner for a reminder for their next detail.
 
I think you have a winner, The look perfect to me
 
Whitethunder46 said:
Forgot this one:

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I think this one looks the best. The others look basic and as a customer I might think you did it on your computer rather than a professionally done card. I would suggest stating Owner rather than Deatiler since that is already assumed...or you could just leave a title off completely. On the back of the card you could put an appointment time form. This might encourage people to call to make an appointment. Increase the font size on the phone number. A silver font color might give the card more "pop." THe red lettering doesnt really seem to fit.

Hey just my 2 cents. Feel free to disregard.
 
Nuke33 said:
Are you a mobil detailer? or do you go and pick there car up? I like the date and time part... The web address is a good idea, Do you have any terms on canceling an appointment like a fee or something... Becasue you could say something about that.
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That's a good point. If you're a mobile detailer you could put on the bottom line estimated time for delivery.
 
Whitethunder46 said:
After leaving a few times and coming back to it, this is the Final Design:

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I think this one is the best. If the cost is not too much more I would go with a gloss finish.
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Gary Sword said:
Whitethunder46 said:
After leaving a few times and coming back to it, this is the Final Design:

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I think this one is the best. If the cost is not too much more I would go with a gloss finish.
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with gloss, very very classy! the nicest i have seen from any detailer yet! truly.
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Yep, that's pretty much what I'm doing. Will let it sit for a few days and then come back to it to make sure. I know it's just a business card, but I'm a perfectionist. It needs to look, well... perfect.

Now time to try and work some kinks out of my logo design.
 
Hey I really like the last one with the beading! As was mentioned, the name at the top looks a little out of place. What if you put the Hart's Detailing portion a little higher to the top, and put your name right above the phone number?
 
I have both domains now....

.net and .com.

Which should I put on my cards and flyers? .com or .net?
 
Whitethunder46 said:
I have both domains now....

.net and .com.

Which should I put on my cards and flyers? .com or .net?
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Greg, I like the first one with your name on top..your name on the bottom seems to over crowd the info below your name.. other-wise the card looks good..

I was looking again..have you tried putting your name on the upper right hand corner.

thats just my opinion don't take it to Hart ;)
 
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Well got the website up for the most part. Still a work in progress and will be forever. I'm looking to get a lot more pictures up as soon as spring comes.
Hart's Auto Detailing
 
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