I finally finished and updated my site...

ReflectiveAuto said:
Can you give me your opinions?
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too simple as information , and too loaded with colors and squary shapes with non sense.
not sure what your target is but you will not gain quality clients with that site, plus is not even mention what area do you service?? dahh?! only in the page title.
get back and do your homeworks if you wanna sell some packages , that will be my opinion
 
I would take out in the basic service that the wax will last 3to4 months. What happens if it only last 2 months. You are advertising 3 to 4 months. Just my 2 cents.
 
I agree that more info is needed. Like mentioned above, what area you are in should be made clear right away. I would also add that it should be clear if you are mobile or a brick and mortar business. If I was searching through google for a detail(like many people do) I would be going through websites very quickly and these two things should be made clear right away. Great start and it looks like it is coming along nicely. I am also currently putting a site together and know it can be a little frustrating at times.
 
The referral and military discount squares look like buttons, maybe they should be buttons?

On the photos page you left the text "double click to add text here" in the top left of the large photo at the top of your site.

Might just be my computer but I feel like the text on the services page is a little small.

Hope things are going well for your business, when im back in town ill give you a call. have you found a shop?
 
It's called Reflective Auto Detailing. So why do I see no reflections of the surrounding environment off the car's paint on the race car main pic? Also not sure why a race car is your main pic. Are you catering to race cars and not consumer vehicles?

Not a bad site for a first attempt. I'm sure it will improve nicely. Check out some other detail sites for some ideas.
 
ForceField said:
It's called Reflective Auto Detailing. So why do I see no reflections of the surrounding environment off the car's paint on any of the photos of cars on your site? Also not sure why a race car is your main pic. Are you catering to race cars and not consumer vehicles?

Not a bad site for a first attempt. I'm sure it will improve nicely. Check out some other detail sites for some ideas.
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Have you not seen any of the pics...There are tons of Reflections. I even have a Jetta trunk that has reflections of stuff hanging on the wall.
 
The video you shot of the 2010 Audi, you get down to show the front wheel but only show the very top of the wheel. The camera movement is too fast and jerky. You also covered the microphone with your fingers in some parts and the audio becomes very muffled and inaudible.
 
Ok...I forgive you...I was about to start crying in the corner and dump my Zymol Titanium Wax down the toilet.
 
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