My Gift To My Cousin

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Well I have been busy working and refining my gift to my cousin and thought I would share the results. To recap, my cousin originally wanted me to create a business card for him and I did a half-ass job. I then went back and really gave it my all with trying to create a visually appealing card. He then came to me asking if I would redo his detailing brochure. Challenge accepted! This is what I came up with:


The redesigned logo:

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v Side Note:The pricing guide was slightly jumbled up at one point and we both missed it, so the next go around those elements will be fixed.

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Sorry forgot to mention that I have taken any picks of the business card.
 
Wow that is a beautiful brochure. I like it, it gives the information needed while not being too cluttered.

Actually, only thing I wouldn't have is the part where it says that the premium package is reserved for exotic and prized automobiles. This might put people off purchasing that top option because they might not think it is for them since they don't have a premium automobile.
 
That is an absolutely gorgeous brochure! Initially, I thought it was just a business card but as I scrolled down I was amazed at the level of detail and content.

I like the way it breaks down the different phases and packages. The illustrations showing some of the tools necessary to perform such work clearly define the expectation or final result.

Great job! :props:
 
Very nice! It's clear concise and to the point. A professional job if you ask me.
 
Now that is NICE! Not much else I can say except...WOW.

Bill
 
I like it.

It's a business card with a focus on educating your customer with the end-result being hopefully a sale.

It's easy and fast to read with a great use of pictures.

Tells the potential,

  • Who's doing the work
  • How to contact them
  • The area they serve
  • What's in it for you the customer

How much to have 500 printed?


:)
 
Hey cuz. (<--hint hint wink wink)
Very nice job indeed.
 
Thats really awesome, both as a gift and the work itself. Looks really classy and proper without being obnoxious. Really informative as well for the customer. I love it. Good job!

I am ALSO curious how much it would cost to print 500 of those. I have the ability to design handouts like that for myself but I don't have the paper/printer needed to do it.
 
Very nice job. I like it a lot. How much do you charge? lol
 
Yeah great work! Perfect gift for the holidays for a detailer. Will def help educate his customers and land sales. :props:
 
Like very much, but have a couple people proofread it.
In one shot I noticed "take it further" I believe it's properly "farther".

Typos or grammar errors will kill the "excessive detail" theme.
 
The design is perfect for the job. Clear, easy to read, BIG pictures of actual work. I hate when people put cars on their advertisements they have never worked on, or just a bunch of shiny glittery exotics.

This is one of the best brochures I have seen!
 
I have to hand it to my cousin, he is a beast when it comes to this stuff, he put a lot of time and effort into it, I know I gave him a run around on it, trying to get it perfect, and he did. I would have been lost without his help. Thanks again buddy, hope the christmas presents I got ya make up for it. And also thanks for everyones replies, really appreciate them, your responses were what we were going for, but again I give all the credit to my cousin, he knows his stuff. I cant wait to see how it works out. Thanks again buddy. Now if I can just get you to detail a car that good, lol, no for real the boy has some detailing skills as well, I cant seem to detail anything without his help.
 
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