my website

I like it.

One question. You mention you vaccuum the carpets in almost every service. So for the interior service I was expecting a shampoo. Do you steam (extract) or shampoo carpets? I'm assuming this in a 100% mobile service you have?

*edit* Also there's some spelling mistakes here and there that need touching up.

I like your price points, very good!
 
thanks for mentioning that. I forgot to remove the interior stuff from all the sections.
 
Looks good.

Here's one typo I noticed

Q: How long does a wax job last?
A: Wax last anywhere between 4-8 week, but at Sully's Detailing we use nothing but high quality products. Since we ues 3 leaves of protection and high quality wax it will last 4-6 months.
 
You missed "Leaves" which I'm sure is supposed to be "levels" right?
 
frosty said:
Looks good.

Here's one typo I noticed

Q: How long does a wax job last?
A: Wax last anywhere between 4-8 week, but at Sully's Detailing we use nothing but high quality products. Since we ues 3 leaves of protection and high quality wax it will last 4-6 months.
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Fixed
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Also Fixed the price page again
 
Under "Car - Wash" and "Trucks/SUV - Wash" they still list vaccuuming, is this right?

Other then that everything seems good now :)
 
Under About Sullys Detailing Actually might want to change this to Sully's

Also, this sentence.

" It all started by detailing neighborhood cars a few for friend's cars" Maybe it all started by detailing cars in the neighborhood as well as a few cars for friends?

Also, the first, basic wash still has vacuuming but the rest dont.

Cars:
Wash - $20-30 includes: washing the car with two bucket method, wheels, tires, wheel wells, tire shine, windows, vacuuming the interior, and wiping down the dash

Under Wash/Premium Wax it reads
"clay bat wheels" I assume that should read clay car, wheels ....

Also under contact us, to contact Shawn, the email address isn't linked where you can click on it. Mike it is.

All I have time to do. Sorry if that's nit picking, I'm a developer by day. :)
 
Wash/Premium Wax - $60+ includes: washing the car with two bucket method, clay bar wheels, tires, wheel wells, tire shine, windows, and Premium Wax

1 Step Polish - $125 Hand Wash (Two Bucket Method). clean Rims, (wheels would be a better choice)tires and wheel wells. clay bar to remove tar, road grim and bugs. Premium polish to restore the gloss and condition of the paint. Premium Wax (Provides 2-3 months of protection) or Paint Sealant (Provides 6-12 months of protection) **Can have both applied to you car to enhance the gloss even more (Addition (Additional charges apply)

1 Step Polish - $175 Hand Wash (Two Bucket Method). clean Rims, tires and wheel wells. clay bar to remove tar, road grim and bugs. Premium polish to restore the gloss and condition of the paint. Premium Wax (Provides 2-3 months of protection) or Paint Sealant (Provides 6-12 months of protection) **Can have both applied to your truck/SUV to enhance the gloss even more (Addition( Additional charges apply)

Under headlight restoration services.

Getting your headlights restored to their shiny clear self is a must. Not only does it make the front of your vehicle look trashy but it makes seeing at night nearly impossible because your headlights are not clear. We use only the best Wolfgang and Pinnacle products when restoring your headlights to make sure your headlights stay clear for the life of the car (**If taken care of properly).

I would say the above like this.

Safe night driving requires a clear vision. Our Headlight Restoration Service will restore the clarity to headlight lens, assuring you a clear look at what's ahead. Lifetime Warranty available.
 
Looks pretty good, $30/hr is one hell of a deal for paint correction.
 
You mentioned in your Before/After photos, your process, I would not list using Dawn as part of any process.......you could potentially scare a customer off if they read that.
 
Sullys Detailing was started 2 years ago by two friends who had a passion for cars and keeping them looking at their best. It all started by detailing neighborhood cars a few for friend's cars. Our customers were so happy that they told their friends and word quickly got around about our small detailing business.

Now we are detailing people's cars from all over South Florida! We come to you using only the finest products and quality work for your vehicle. We believe in perfection and deliver nothing less!

Sincerely,

Shawn and Mike

Just a few ideas for your intro page.

Two friends and a passion for clean cars. That's how it all got started. One neighbor at a time, one friend at a time. Now Sully's Detailing is putting a beautiful, clean car back on the road every day.

We come to you!

Using the highest quality professional products, we design a program to fit your car and your budget. From a professional wash and shine, to a complete detail, Sully's Detailing is the preferred choice of our satisfied customers.

Customer satisfaction guaranteed.

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I suggest omitting the *two years* reference. Today, most customers are looking for longevity and experience. Prove yourself to them, and it won't matter if you just started yesterday. They will call you back and refer you to others.

Also, you speak of perfection. Even though we all like to strive toward perfection, perfection can't be achieved by humans. Something to consider before promising such a feat.
 
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Where you state WAX LAST 4-6 week the word week should be plural as in "weeks"
 
Wendell Jarvis said:
You mentioned in your Before/After photos, your process, I would not list using Dawn as part of any process.......you could potentially scare a customer off if they read that.
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And, since you are using clay and an intensive polish, a normal shampoo is all that
is needed.
 
I think your "additional services" prices are a bit high. You charge $30/hour for paint correction but $40-$80 for polishing exhaust tips? Are you saying it takes you one to nearly 3 hours to polish an exhaust tip? The other prices under that section are a bit high, too. This is, of course, just my opinion.

Colin
 
Great looking site! I'd only offer one suggestion that was along the lines of what Blackfire mentioned... your home page makes it sound like two friends got together and just decided that they'd start detailing vehicles. Kind of like two kids with a lawn mower mowing lawns. You might want to consider making it sound more like a life long business venture that was started. I'd also consider putting some before/after shots on the opening page. Perhaps small photos on the side that open to that following page.
 
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