Need Advice....

[VsAutoDetailing]

hey guys i just finished my website and i would really value your guys opinion.... let me know if i missed anything or if you think i should add something thank you guys very much!

 

[Rico24]

Nice start to the site but I would suggest fixing the picture on the main page. You can see where you blacked out the logo...

Other than that, easy navigation, and a great start.

 

[VsAutoDetailing]

Wow thanks I didn't notice!!!

 

[Bunky]

I think you should state exactly what areas you serve. Your about us is "tri state area" but where is that? The web site looks slick but the opening page just has your name and with no "grabber" like a summary of your services or service area.

 

[215Detailing]

The Fan Package

2-3 Hours

Exterior
- Rinse Car
- Foam The Car To Break Down Dirt Hand Wash Car With 2 Bucket Method
- Door Jams Cleaned And Degreased
- Wheels And Tires Cleaned/Degreased
- Hand Dry
- Water Blown Out Of Door Jams and Seams Using Air Compressor

Interior
- Blow Out All Hard To Reach Areas With Air Compressor
- Vacuum Interior Carpets And Upholstery Windows
- Cleaned For A Perfect Streak Free Shine
- Removing Dust From Dashboard And Door Panels
Hello You may want to move word windows down to next line from this:
- Vacuum Interior Carpets And Upholstery Windows
Maybe to this:
- Windows Cleaned For A Perfect Streak Free Shine
Nice website did you create ?


 

[VsAutoDetailing]

@215 thanks man appreciate it and yea I did make the site I'm in the music industry and learned a lot of tricks to by pass paying 1000 for a website lol so I'm detailing to have some constant money flow when I'm on tour and stuff

 

[215Detailing]

@215 thanks man appreciate it and yea I did make the site I'm in the music industry and learned a lot of tricks to by pass paying 1000 for a website lol so I'm detailing to have some constant money flow when I'm on tour and stuff

Great wishing you the best success

 

[hernandez.art13]

I like the names of your packages lol, I play the upright bass btw.

 

[Scott@IncrediblyDetailed]

Your homepage should have information on it. It's never going to rank in the search results.

 

[DaVinciAutoSpa]

First, I like the site. It's black, (always bad ass!), it's clean looking, and your font style is modern and cool. Great job.

Under 'About':
Break that paragraph into smaller paragraphs. It will be easier to read.

Perfection Package:
'Removal' is misspelled. (Unless you want to spell it 'removel')

Rockstar Package:
'Removal is misspelled.

The Fan Package:
Any reason you're not offering wax under this package?

Good luck and I'd like to see some pictures of your work. If it's anything like your site, we'll all be impressed.

 

[VsAutoDetailing]

Thank you to everyone I really appreciate if you see anything else let me know and if you guys need anything message me!

 

[Pureshine]

I have only one suggestion make the font bigger in your services hard to read.

 

[GreatAvalon]

Yes, I really like your font choice. I like the sleekness and elegance of the site. I'm looking at this as a consumer since I am not a professional detailer, and I was left with a good impression by the modernity and sleekness of the website. That's good because it relates to how you can make the vehicles' finishes look newer (modern) and sleek (shiny). Even when you go back a page, the way the page slides to the left is really cool.

One thing - under the Perfection Package, "Cleaning of Breaks...", Breaks should be Brakes* :xyxthumbs:

 

[GreatAvalon]

I have only one suggestion make the font bigger in your services hard to read.

+1, see how it looks taken up a size or two

 

[VsAutoDetailing]

I agree with the font I jumped it up

 

[GreatAvalon]

I agree with the font I jumped it up

:dblthumb2:

 

[VsAutoDetailing]

Really appreciate all of your guys opinions and advice it is much appreciated

 

[HateSwirls]

I like the way you named your packages and the breakdown of it.
Can't wait to see some videos in the video section
Also love the color of your site.
Good luck with it.

Question for me.

Who has the best deal on offering you your own website! I looked into Vista and seemed OK but I have nothing to compare it too being I only starting looking into getting my own site just yesterday.

However I did order some business cards from Vista , a member who mentioned it on the forums got my attention, thanks to whomever said it, sorry forgot your name.
I'm always asked if I have a card and figured it was time to get some.
Oh, ordered a shirt too

 

[VsAutoDetailing]

I used wix to do mine but I add all my own fonts and pictures you can't go wrong for 100 bucks for the year