New Business Cards. Yes or No????

Second card rocks. Love the logo, and the icons for wash, wax etc. Motto is centered on one line, and while people like the mustang what happens to people who hate Fords?

Print a small batch, say 6 month supply and continue to tweak as inspiration strikes.
 
Get an S17 or an Enzo or something on your card maybe? No offense, but Ford isn't high end. Maybe if they stopped using that retarded single sway rear axle that tosses the rear end out when you hit a puddle I'd maybe like them.

In all honesty though, the whole bottom lay out of the card is nice. I like it, just change the image. Maybe take your whole second card design with the identity, and replace it with a car image. The ED thing, it's too generic. It looks like something anyone could throw together in photoshop or word in like 5 seconds.

However, if you had a fine tracer line around the 'e' that is the dark gray color like the 'l' then it might pop and be more legible. Also, adjust the kerning so the right side of your e is flush with the l. I think that would help. Either way, you've got something good going. Keep up the good work. I do love the imagery at the bottom. Very nice ^.^
 
Hmmmmm. Im so confused now, lol, but thanks for all the advice again, it all makes since, just got to try to figure out whats the best way to go, I may just have to print up a few different ones and see which gets the most business. Have to have another pow wow with the designer, my couisn, were going to be shooting some photos this week for my brochure, white sheet and all, try to get it professional, maybe I can get a good pick for the card background. Thanks again guys, keep the comments coming, ill keep ya updated.
 
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