New engine detail video

Honestly??? Well since your asking....I couldn't finish it. Unbelievably annoying voice, sounds like a robot. And the music isn't great either. Would do nothing to encourage me to seek your services....sorry...you asked.
 
I thought it was pretty good overall, especially once I found out that it was an actual womans voice and not a robot. [I hate videos narrated by robots]

1 thing that I would consider adding would be a visual graphic to accompany her key benefits to getting the engine detailed.

For example: When she says “A clean engine is a pleasure to work on”... Have those words appear on the screen preceded by “1.”

And on her next point, display “2. Shows pride of ownership”

“3. Mechanics take notice of a clean engine and will be more careful/do a better job when working on it”

“4. Adds value if/when you decide to sell the vehicle”

Being able to not only hear but more importantly see and read a list of benefits will stick in viewers heads and give them a simple yet memorable reminder of your services.

Just my 2 cents...
 
I think it’s very compelling, too. Impressive before and after visuals.
 
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Love the voice. You have a cool accent. Nice before and after transitions.
 
Eldorado2k said:
I thought it was pretty good overall, especially once I found out that it was an actual womans voice and not a robot. [I hate videos narrated by robots]

1 thing that I would consider adding would be a visual graphic to accompany her key benefits to getting the engine detailed.

For example: When she says “A clean engine is a pleasure to work on”... Have those words appear on the screen preceded by “1.”

And on her next point, display “2. Shows pride of ownership”

“3. Mechanics take notice of a clean engine and will be more careful/do a better job when working on it”

“4. Adds value if/when you decide to sell the vehicle”

Being able to not only hear but more importantly see and read a list of benefits will stick in viewers heads and give them a simple yet memorable reminder of your services.

Just my 2 cents...
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Very good idea! I will do so on the next video. Might add it to the french version too since it has not been rendered yet.

Thanks!
 
Daviddear30 said:
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Love the voice. You have a cool accent. Nice before and after transitions.
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Ya, it's not me ;) I hired a professional voice actor for the narration. I thought her voice was pretty neat too. Confused about the first comment, maybe he doesn't like british accents?
 
Calendyr said:
Ya, it's not me ;) I hired a professional voice actor for the narration. I thought her voice was pretty neat too. Confused about the first comment, maybe he doesn't like british accents?
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Has nothing to do with accent...was more the tone of her voice. But obviously i am in the minority...lol..so I guess you are on the right track...roll with it.
 
I actually enjoyed the video but I wish that it showed the actual technique.
 
Thanks. But I don't want to teach anything in these videos I am producing. Those are designed to give a potential client an idea of the result they can expect. I am not trying to teach them how to do it themselves ;) If you want how to videos, there are a gazillion of them on Youtube. I suggest you check the channels by Ammo NYC, Pan the Organized (who is a member here), Dallas Paint Correction and Darren Priest from Fetish Details. Those will teach you more than any book or course you can take ;)
 
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