New Website Design, Feedback Wanted

[JamesCs]

Hey everyone, I just finished overhauling my website design a couple of days ago and was wondering what you guys think of it chastonaysmobiledetailing.com I know it's a little cheesy in a couple of places, but it targets middle class Floridians so it works.

 

[DetailKitty]

I like it... very clean and easy to read. You don't need a flashy website. I appreciate the color scheme and the font is very legible and an appropriate size.

There was one thing that confused me, the maintenance schedule- I get the "and $75 on the 4th visit"... but it took me several times reading over it to understand that part. Perhaps a slight rewording in the left-hand column would work. Maybe that's just me.
Only other thing I'd say negative is I like hyphens in phone numbers.

Overall I like it. Nice job :xyxthumbs:

 

[BudgetPlan1]

Title bar still says 'college kid'

 

[RonAlv]

Clean website, noticed only 2 photo's in the entire web site. Before and after portfolio may help. Just my .02 cents.

 

[JamesCs]

I like it... very clean and easy to read. You don't need a flashy website. I appreciate the color scheme and the font is very legible and an appropriate size.

There was one thing that confused me, the maintenance schedule- I get the "and $75 on the 4th visit"... but it took me several times reading over it to understand that part. Perhaps a slight rewording in the left-hand column would work. Maybe that's just me.
Only other thing I'd say negative is I like hyphens in phone numbers.

Overall I like it. Nice job :xyxthumbs:

Thank you, I tried rewording that maintenance section a couple of times. Hopefully adding more in the left hand column will help like you said

 

[JamesCs]

I'm working on getting together some good pictures for that. I'll be adding them as soon as possible

 

[LEDetailing]

Services and Pricing ? James Chastonay's College Kid Mobile Detailing

I like it, not over done, gives you the info you need.

 

[briarpatch]

I like it.....one question...whats the difference between the 'quick wax' you mention as a 10.00 add on for the Clementine...and the 15.00 Quick Wax you mention under 'Additional Services'? or is it only 10.00 for a limited time? Somewhere on the website, mention that all prices listed are only estimates, and could change based upon inspection. I might be inclined to just add the 10.00 into my basic prices and include the tire dressing as part of the Clementine.

Just my .02

 

[ViperGuy21]

Looks pretty good!
However, its carnauba, not caranuba

 

[JamesCs]

I like it.....one question...whats the difference between the 'quick wax' you mention as a 10.00 add on for the Clementine...and the 15.00 Quick Wax you mention under 'Additional Services'? or is it only 10.00 for a limited time? Somewhere on the website, mention that all prices listed are only estimates, and could change based upon inspection. I might be inclined to just add the 10.00 into my basic prices and include the tire dressing as part of the Clementine.

Just my .02

its $10 for a limited time, I'll make sure to clear that up on the site.

 

[JamesCs]

And thanks everyone for the compliments and pointing out the couple of things I screwed up. I can't believe that I've been spelling, reading and saying carnauba the wrong way for years...

 

[briarpatch]

Wish you the best of luck in your endeavor

 

[AJS]

hey man looks great, that opening intro "call or email today through our contact page..." etc seems like a bit of a mouthful. maybe shorten it down to half of that. other than that its a great easy layout. i managed to navaigate it easily