New Website

Looks cool. Just a friendly heads up. I THINK there's a grammar error here

"We make used cars look new and new cars we protected as soon as you buy your car."

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Sure did.
Going fix it.

Thanks

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JohnsHandWash&Wax said:
Looks good. How much is it costing you?
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It cost me $99.00 for one year.
Great price IMO after I looked at other packages.
I'm working on it right now so later check it out again:)

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Thanks guys.

New update

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I like your website, very easy to read and navigate. I did find a typo though in the "about us" section.

Cajun Detiling by Kevin comes in. We want everyone to know the difference between a car wash and a detail.
 
Rob_B said:
I like your website, very easy to read and navigate. I did find a typo though in the "about us" section.

Cajun Detiling by Kevin comes in. We want everyone to know the difference between a car wash and a detail.
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I really need to proof read. Lol
 
Thats a long url.

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Looks great. I have a couple of suggestions.


We accept nothing less than perfect.
We accept nothing less than perfection.

We offer two ways in getting your car detailed, we can come to you or if you prefer we can have it picked up, the choice is yours.

We offer two ways of getting your car detailed. We can come to you or if you prefer we can have your car picked up. The choice is yours

We make used cars look new and new cars we protect as soon as you buy your car.

We make used cars look new. We also protect new cars when you purchase them to keep your car looking new.

If you like it use it. If not that's cool. I hope you are feeling better and business is good!!





 
As a web designer in the past I would like to offer some constructive criticism:

On all the pages, the pics don't line up. For example, on the home page, the pic of the black car at the top left corner sticks out past the orange rectangular title graphic. This looks hacked up and conveys to me your workmanship on my car might also be less than perfection.

I would invest in a tripod and a decent camera. Detailing (to me, and being a noob to all this) is all about looking good and if I'm going to pay someone to detail a car for me, the photos should be in focus and look good. I've seen a lot of nice crisp photos of finished cars and the home page shot on your site should be the best shot ever. The product bottles are a little out of focus, too. I'd suggest getting rid of them. What are you showing me, the finish or the bottles? Something to consider.

You have two "abouts" in the menu: About Us and About. Confusing to me.

For the location page, you want to include copy (text) that specifically indicates where you are at 'that someone would type into google to find you'! So what would someone type into a search engine to find you? If it is the word "Louisiana" then put that there instead of "LA". Instead of "surrounding areas" list "including the areas: Opelousas, Crowley, ..." Something like "Cajun Detailing, near University of Louisiana, is located in the heart of Lafayette, serving the surrounding areas of Opelousas, Crowley, etc etc etc"
 
wlshephard said:
Looks great. I have a couple of suggestions.


We accept nothing less than perfect.
We accept nothing less than perfection.

We offer two ways in getting your car detailed, we can come to you or if you prefer we can have it picked up, the choice is yours.

We offer two ways of getting your car detailed. We can come to you or if you prefer we can have your car picked up. The choice is yours

We make used cars look new and new cars we protect as soon as you buy your car.

We make used cars look new. We also protect new cars when you purchase them to keep your car looking new.

If you like it use it. If not that's cool. I hope you are feeling better and business is good!!





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I'll change it , I want others to tell me both positive and negitive comments about my new site.
I know it's not yet perfect but with suggestions from people like yourself it helps in getting a better looking website.

Thanks:dblthumb2:
 
Gokite said:
As a web designer in the past I would like to offer some constructive criticism:

On all the pages, the pics don't line up. For example, on the home page, the pic of the black car at the top left corner sticks out past the orange rectangular title graphic. This looks hacked up and conveys to me your workmanship on my car might also be less than perfection.

I would invest in a tripod and a decent camera. Detailing (to me, and being a noob to all this) is all about looking good and if I'm going to pay someone to detail a car for me, the photos should be in focus and look good. I've seen a lot of nice crisp photos of finished cars and the home page shot on your site should be the best shot ever. The product bottles are a little out of focus, too. I'd suggest getting rid of them. What are you showing me, the finish or the bottles? Something to consider.

You have two "abouts" in the menu: About Us and About. Confusing to me.

For the location page, you want to include copy (text) that specifically indicates where you are at 'that someone would type into google to find you'! So what would someone type into a search engine to find you? If it is the word "Louisiana" then put that there instead of "LA". Instead of "surrounding areas" list "including the areas: Opelousas, Crowley, ..." Something like "Cajun Detailing, near University of Louisiana, is located in the heart of Lafayette, serving the surrounding areas of Opelousas, Crowley, etc etc etc"
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You offered me some good advice, thank you.
I just started with it, working on it between jobs.
I want to change one of the tabs, both look so close to the same.
About us- About. It came that way by default.
Yeah it's confusing to me also but I'll make changes to it soon.

Thanks for taking time in helping me:dblthumb2:
 
Just did another update on my website.
I tell you it takes time to work on it, to get it like you want it, I'm still not there yet but for the most part I feel better about it.

Check it out if you have a moment.

Having fun:dblthumb2:

Cajun Detailing by Kevin
 
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