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this is the first logo my friend put together for me, I really like it. the only thing I might change is the font.
 
Matt@landrover said:


this is the first logo my friend put together for me, I really like it. the only thing I might change is the font.
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I don't particularly like the font used for Revive, I like how the designs basic and clean though. And I like the name a lot, I spent months and month coming up with a name for my detailing gig. The name + the EKG lines go well together. I think a lot of people will make that connection when they see it.
 
Sweet looking logo, it will catch lots of attention, overall i think its perfect just as it, smooth yet clean cut
 
Matt@landrover said:


this is the first logo my friend put together for me, I really like it. the only thing I might change is the font.
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looks nice,and the name completely sums up what you do.as for the colors the ekg line would look cool in red leave the rest black.
 
I like it but would do the card in black with the sinewave in turquoise to look like a momitor in a hospital and use spot gloss on the company name a wave. The lettering would look good in a silver against the black with the turquoise through the middle. Just my opinion though.
 
GSKR said:
looks nice,and the name completely sums up what you do.as for the colors the ekg line would look cool in red leave the rest black.
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Red would be sweet :) Or make it look like a real hospital monitor as also suggested.

Really anything to make the line stand out more would be good. I like the typefaces and simple design.
 
Are you purposely choosing black and white for the logo? Is the same design/color scheme going to be used on your website and business cards? I think that some color is needed to make it pop--not on the EKG line. Perhaps on the business name "Revive"?
 
I'd have to agree on going blue on black. looks like a real EKG monitor screen....

Mike
 
I like how it's not the same old vehicle outline.
Nice concept :dblthumb2:
 
I do like that you added the embossing to the new font, however I think that the added shadows are a bit much. I would also leave the bottom as it was, and only emboss Revive. You'll lose clarity on shirts and posters; hard edges (no shadow) may be a better choice here.

I also agree with going dark turquoise/teal or even red on the line.

Also you end on a flat line - maybe end in an upstroke? Subliminally influence your customer.

Overall I love the simplicity and agree with the earlier comment of avoiding the vehicle outline.
 
Agree with Mike. Plus the actual reading/pulse looks more realistic. I think the font looks good. Clean and simple

Like the name and basic design. Very creative. Now go find a used ambulance and use that as you mobile rig. If not mobile it would be one hell of a billboard parked outside your location. Yellow lights a flashin'
 
LEDetailing said:
Like the name and basic design. Very creative. Now go find a used ambulance and use that as you mobile rig. If not mobile it would be one hell of a billboard parked outside your location. Yellow lights a flashin'
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i thought about this, but the stigma of a retired ambulance is a bit to much for me. my wife would be burning sage every night when i get home, hahaha.
 
The drop shadow on the new version looks better. The original shadowing made the letters look "blurry"
 
Matt@landrover said:
i thought about this, but the stigma of a retired ambulance is a bit to much for me. my wife would be burning sage every night when i get home, hahaha.
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I think an ambulance themed Ford Transit or Econoline would look cool. Vinyl wrap with your logo and ambulance type features.
 
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