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Any tools and supplies that you have neatly organized and put together should be featured (with you in the foreground, if at all) People are naturally amazed at variety, and more importantly, the premium buyer knows that your industry is not "one size fits all." A show of your supplies will give them the confidence that you have the right stuff for their car. I don't know about different spelling, but in the scratch removal, depth is spelled dept (maybe that's right over there) An educated buyer knows that clay bar is a necessity. To not have that included in your top package looks like you want to cut corners or that you're trying to hard to upsell. As so many others have said, I'd let folks know that published prices are hard to guarantee and that until you get working on the car, they are subject to change.
 
jamesalanb said:
  • I don't know about different spelling, but in the scratch removal, depth is spelled dept (maybe that's right over there)

  • An educated buyer knows that clay bar is a necessity. To not have that included in your top package looks like you want to cut corners or that you're trying to hard to upsell.

  • As so many others have said, I'd let folks know that published prices are hard to guarantee and that until you get working on the car, they are subject to change.
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Fixed depth and dept was incorrect :props: a lot

hhhmmm clay bar i think that would be a waste on some of the cars i do yo uknow

That last comment is great advice
 
James said:
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Make that you header! I was impressed when I saw it, but disappointed to see it hidden down in the corner of your site

That picture tells me you are serious about your work, and you look like someone I could trust
 
Flash Gordon said:
Make that you header! I was impressed when I saw it, but disappointed to see it hidden down in the corner of your site

That picture tells me you are serious about your work, and you look like someone I could trust
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Where the mx-5 (miata) is on the front page maybe ?

i am thinking of doing a slide show instead of the MASSIVE logo

see the dimensions for the header are approx 600x2/300 which is not great for square pictures

what you guys think that would be like
 
James said:
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Where the mx-5 (miata) is on the front page maybe ?

i am thinking of doing a slide show instead of the MASSIVE logo

what you guys think that would be like
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I would put it where your logo is (header)

Where the miata is; make it a slide show of 6-10 cars. You don't want to load the site down with to many pictures

Your logo I would put to the left of the pictures....and shrink it down some for Christ's sake :D
 
Flash Gordon said:
I would put it where your logo is (header)

Where the miata is; make it a slide show of 6-10 cars. You don't want to load the site down with to many pictures

Your logo I would put to the left of the pictures....and shrink it down some for Christ's sake :D
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shrink :xyxthumbs: is #1

i should have made myself clearer, sorry

i was thinking of having a slide show where the miata is and put these pictures there MX Valet - Imgur

Flash Gordons i would prefer your idea but i dont know how i would make it work .... maybe a fade effect between the logo and picture
 
James said:
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shrink :xyxthumbs: is #1

i should have made myself clearer, sorry

i was thinking of having a slide show where the miata is and put these pictures there MX Valet - Imgur

Flash Gordons i would prefer your idea but i dont know how i would make it work .... maybe a fade effect between the logo and picture
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Yea man. I would ad those pictures for sure.

Maybe you could try and 'ghost' the image in?
 
I'm not a fan of the Gallery to many pictures I would make it simpler. Most people spend only about 2-3 min on websites.
 
Thanks a lot guys, i love it now but the machine polish page need work
 
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